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Sonic Chronicles :1: -intro- by *Cabalistic:iconCabalistic:





Sonic Chronicles: The Dawn Of Eve (Series #1) Preamble

The beauty that was once the City of Station Square…was no more. For one to think that such a period of time…a time were heroes walked among the feeble mortals of today. This tragedy could have been stopped, it could have never happened, but even the heroes of today couldn’t stop the evolution of this new awaking evil. An evil that no one expected…

An iniquity…

That caught everyone off their guard…

This malevolence, this living sin hid somewhere…waiting until the right moment to leap out of his hiding place. And as it waited, it began to collect energy…energy of purity turn to rot by its touch. As it grew, it still remained hidden in the body of a good soul. Where it lie dormant.

It waited and grew… grew and waited …

Until one day…the day when the soul of a hero was pushed so far into the essence of evil itself. When Rage, Anger, Depravation, Sadness...these emotions that the gentle soul never experienced at such extremes. Clashed all at once…

And from then on…he evil within that soul unleashed it self itself not. Coming out in so many uncontrollable quantities…that the gentle soul that stood up for peace and justice was devoured by it.

And it consumed it, changed it, and forged it to something new. Into something foul…and sinister…

At first, it felt like taking revenge out on the person that caused all this. But the feeling, the feeling after all the years of heroism, all those contained sensations. Felt so great that it couldn’t be reversed.

The soul didn’t want it be reversed…

Now you stand before the wasteland…and you wonder. Where was the blue hero that saved the planet so many time is the past? Where has he gone? Has he abandoned the world? Or worse…did he die?

Could he have stopped this destruction from coming to fruition?

Or just maybe…

Just maybe…

Deep in your heart…you truly know why….

The reason for his sudden disappearance…

For one can only take the stress and hold it back so much…

Until…that person implodes.

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STOP THIS!!! Amy screamed at the top of her lungs with the last of her energy, coughing up the red liquid of life in the process.

Her wounds felt like she had being stabbed constantly with a sharp knife every single breath she took. Her energy, strength, and her life itself were diminishing at a fast rate and it was hard to cling on to life at such a painful state. She could have flat out died right then and now, but she had hope. She had hope that her blue hero would arrive as usual, sweeping her from the concrete and bring life to a world of a hopeless mess. It was because of that hope that she gave her that little bit of strength to drag her life along the line little linger. Which was hard, since all of her friends…all the people she knew were dead…even the new ones.

They were all just corpses amongst the rest of the dead that was there and debris that piled across the city. Some were so dismembered that they just looked like another piece of wreckage. A horrid sight to see for such an innocent young girl…

Amy Rose…was dying. She could feel her last breath slowly coming to her each take in of air harder and harder to achieve.

“Why…?” She cried out in deep sadness. “Why were you not here Sonic!!! Why did you leave when this monster showed his face!!!”

Amy coughed up blood. The mere saying of those words made her lungs cringe and pulsate with agony. She tried standing, but every attempt lead to her collapsing in exhaustion. Tears of horror erupted from her eyes as she began to hear footsteps. The same cold feeling ran down her spine as she could feel the freezing darkness of a powerful aura. The being stopped at her and looked at her with a rather strange content smile, a smile that seemed very wrong at the time being.

The being chuckled…

“Well what do you know...you out of all people…still breathing?” Your hope for him must be stronger than I thought. “I can sense you though…your time is almost done…you won’t last much longer. Pity…I could have had a little more fun before I headed to the other city.”

Amy growled and spat at his face.

“You bastard!!!” she screamed. “IF SONIC WAS HERE-

“What!!! What could he have done!!! Sonic was weak! Pitiful being…he had so much potential to be more than he was. He could have ruled...none of this would have happened if he had realized it sooner…”

“What in the HELL are you talking about…you act like you know him?” She said with half closed eyes.

The being of darkness smirked…

“I know him better than anyone…because I am him. I am the one that you hope for so much…”

Amy’s eyes widened in disbelief…

“LIAR!!!” she screamed what her aching lungs could muster at the moment …tears streaming down from her eyes.

“Are you calling me a liar? Amy…Amy. If there is one thing I never did to you was lie...” It said calmly as he latched his white-gloved hand around her neck.

The figure of darkness picked the heavily, severely wounded hedgehog off of the ground as if she was weightless…choking what was left of the life that was in her.

“Allow me to take it away form you. Yes…that deep sense of hope. Allow me to show you…what has become of the hero that you once praised. Yes…allow me to kill your sprit AMY!!!”

Suddenly the black figured changed…transforming, into a less powerful state. As this transformation happened…the eyes of Amy Rose widened in horror. A shock so striking, that she couldn’t talk.

Couldn’t breath…

Couldn’t think…

And soon, not long after, Amy’s body went limp.

“Yes…that’s much better…join the rest of those fools who lay along with this dead city. For once in your life…you’re at rest now. Be glad…glad that this as fallen upon you for now. You may never have to see, think, or hear about you precious Sonic again...” It said in a low voice as lamentations began to come out from his eyes

The being tossed the now lifeless body of the pink hedgehog to the side and returned to his powerful state, surrounded by waves of darkness…He took a look at the cloudy gray sky and began to levitate upwards. As he did, he looked at the terrible destruction below.

“Well done Sonic…Well done…”
©2007-2010 *Cabalistic
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Author's Comments

Lets set things off shall we ^^

And what better way than to give the people a weird creepy intro 8D. Don't worry...the mood of the stroy won't be like this all the time ^^

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and (will add her cover art later ^^)

Thanks guys XD

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:iconfireblast133:
Well, you have definitely shown me i have a long way to go to become a good writer. Great job.

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:icongaminefans:
Yay finally took the time to read this one. :dance:

What a first chap I must say!! :O_o::O
Unlike anyone I read so far.
Well, I'm open for totally unique stories, completely off the ordinary and I think I can find just that in this one.

Great job so far. :clap:

Makes me wonder if Shadow was also easily eliminated like the others. :?

Oh well, have to wait and read. :)

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:iconnintendobratt07:
I felt Amy lust for her hero....and yet....
She couldn't reach him....his good heart.....

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:iconrubyhawk:
Ah, well there's the plot I asked about ^^

Running through a few editors may have been good, but even so, your writing has improved since I last saw it. Nice work.

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O_O;; Who, what, where?
:icondarkhymns:
Pretty nice~ There were quite a couple of errors here and there as pointed out. The detail was nice, though I thought there were too many "..." in the beginning of this, cause it felt like it was overemphasizing the suspense and stuff. The chapter probably could have been expanded a bit to show more of the desperateness of the situation, even if only an intro, like a more detailed picture on Amy's emotions.

Otherwise~ This does grab a certain interest. It creates a nice suspense throughout it. Nice job~ :)

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I :heart: fantasy.

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:icongonz-kangaroo:
Uh huh. Well I say its really nice detailed story you done there Ryan. I say you done a nice job man *Nods*
:icontyanite:
What a gripping story! I want more!

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:iconsonicfreak276:
OMG wow that was awsome very creepy of sonic to say but still the mood the aw my god so cool thumbs up on that hehe i love it !^-^ this looks so interesting more more

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:iconumbra-rockchick:
Now this is looking interesting! :D

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:iconkane973:
Nice job :D theres one error though ^^ I can really feel the energy from this unknown guy though :D


Yes…allow me to kill your sprit AMY!!!”

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